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Post  Jordan[: on Wed Feb 20, 2008 10:44 am

Do you think I'm dumb?
That I want to be under your thumb?
Do you want to control me?
Do you think I want to be who you want me to be?
Sorry I'm not perfect.
Maybe I'm not worth it.


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Post  Tanita (: on Wed Feb 20, 2008 10:45 am

And I still love this one too:D<3
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Post  Mileythesmiley on Wed Feb 20, 2008 10:46 am

It's good!
I like the rhyming. ^_^
Really good. Very Happy

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Post  Jordan[: on Wed Feb 20, 2008 10:46 am

Tanita (: wrote:
And I still love this one too:D<3

Thanks <33
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Post  Jordan[: on Wed Feb 20, 2008 10:46 am

Miley wrote:
It's good!
I like the rhyming. ^_^
Really good. Very Happy

Thanks <3
I suck at rhyming hahah.
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Post  Mia-xx on Thu Feb 21, 2008 5:56 am

aaaw dx I love it xD
It's great how you make it rhyme, and still sound great!! Very Happy
Every time I try to make it rhyme,
it always sounds like something a 5 year old could've done better than me Suspect

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Post  Jordan[: on Thu Feb 21, 2008 7:03 am

Mia-xx wrote:
aaaw dx I love it xD
It's great how you make it rhyme, and still sound great!! Very Happy
Every time I try to make it rhyme,
it always sounds like something a 5 year old could've done better than me Suspect

Thankkk you <333
Hehe you have a 5 year olds mind. Very Happy
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