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Tell me..
Mileythesmiley Wed Feb 20, 2008 11:11 am
Tell me why you're always on my mind.
Tell why you don't feel the same.
Tell me what to do, what to say
and what to wear when you're around.
Tell me where to find your heart and how to win it.
Tell me your secrets.
Tell me. Tell me.
Tell why you don't feel the same.
Tell me what to do, what to say
and what to wear when you're around.
Tell me where to find your heart and how to win it.
Tell me your secrets.
Tell me. Tell me.
Random fact: When I wrote this, I actually thought it rhymed.
It wasn't until I was done, I realised it didn't. >_>
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Jordan[: Wed Feb 20, 2008 11:17 am
DUDE!
That's amazing <3
I love it.
And poems don't have to rhyme... Do they?
That's amazing <3
I love it.
And poems don't have to rhyme... Do they?
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Mileythesmiley Wed Feb 20, 2008 11:18 am
xxJordanxx wrote:DUDE!
That's amazing <3
I love it.
And poems don't have to rhyme... Do they?
aaaw, thank you so much.
and no, they don't.
but I intended to with this one,
without luck. xD
and no, they don't.
but I intended to with this one,
without luck. xD
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Jordan[: Wed Feb 20, 2008 11:20 am
Haha yeah I attempt too, and I'll be like
AHA! IT RHYMES!
Then I read it. -.-
Hahaha
AHA! IT RHYMES!
Then I read it. -.-
Hahaha
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Mileythesmiley Wed Feb 20, 2008 11:22 am
Yeah. xD
I think I want to write one nooooow. ^_^
I think I want to write one nooooow. ^_^
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Jordan[: Wed Feb 20, 2008 11:25 am
Miley wrote:Yeah. xD
I think I want to write one nooooow. ^_^
Haha I can only write at night, or when I'm feeling really depressed -.-
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Tanita (: Wed Feb 20, 2008 11:26 am
This is amaizing!
I wish I could write as good as you and Jordan-.-
I really like it!(:
I wish I could write as good as you and Jordan-.-
I really like it!(:
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Mileythesmiley Wed Feb 20, 2008 11:28 am
thank you!!
You can just try. You'll getter better with time
That's how I started,
and I still suck. XD
seriously, a few days ago I found my first poem I made about two years ago, and it was crap! Like a gigantic monster poo!
ahaha.
You can just try. You'll getter better with time
That's how I started,
and I still suck. XD
seriously, a few days ago I found my first poem I made about two years ago, and it was crap! Like a gigantic monster poo!
ahaha.
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Tanita (: Wed Feb 20, 2008 11:30 am
You don't suck!
You're really good!
Believe me,
I've tried for years.
I'm just not a poetic person I guess.
xP
You're really good!
Believe me,
I've tried for years.
I'm just not a poetic person I guess.
xP
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Jordan[: Wed Feb 20, 2008 11:33 am
You don't suck!
You'd know if you did.
Cos see, you wouldn't actually be able to write a poem if you sucked.
haha
Plus I'd have told you, even if I've only known you for a day.
I am... ehm... rudely blunt.
You'd know if you did.
Cos see, you wouldn't actually be able to write a poem if you sucked.
haha
Plus I'd have told you, even if I've only known you for a day.
I am... ehm... rudely blunt.
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Mileythesmiley Wed Feb 20, 2008 11:34 am
aaaaw.
Now you make me smile.
THAAAAAAANK YOOOOOU! *heart heart*
Now you make me smile.
THAAAAAAANK YOOOOOU! *heart heart*
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Julesbox. Wed Feb 20, 2008 11:47 am
MARIAAAAAA! I loved ittt! Like big time! <3
You have to write more!
Seriously wicked...I still can't get over it! Haha
xX:.
Like big time! <3You have to write more!
Seriously wicked...I still can't get over it! Haha
xX:.
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Mia-xx Wed Feb 20, 2008 2:08 pm
I LOVE it!!!!! It's really amazing!!
And stop all that 'I'm not good' thingy, 'cause we all know it isn't true dx you're really, REALLY good!!! xD
- I remember the first poem dx damn that made me laugh., it wasn't that bad, I just found it really funny xD
AND IT RHYMED
xD
And stop all that 'I'm not good' thingy, 'cause we all know it isn't true dx you're really, REALLY good!!! xD
- I remember the first poem dx damn that made me laugh., it wasn't that bad, I just found it really funny xD
AND IT RHYMED
xD
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Shattered Dreamer Thu Apr 03, 2008 9:15 pm
wow...I love this poem, i can totally connect to it. -sigh-
great job!!!
great job!!!
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