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Post  Vick x Tue Feb 26, 2008 3:56 pm

Chapter 9
Victoria smiled nervously, as Danny shifted uncomfortably. “You first....” Victoria said finally, after the long uncomfortable silence. Danny sighed. “Uhm....maybe we should sit...” he suggested, stalling. “Uhm...sure.” she said, the nervous lacing her tone of voice. Danny pulled her into the living room gently by the arm and onto the couch. “Well...uhm...I wanted to say...” he began and paused. “Yeah?” she asked. “I'm sorry if you were offended by anything that you thought I meant by what I said...I didn't, and wouldn't think that you were any type of tease. I would never say anything like that to you...and I'm sorry...” he finished, relieved to get that off his chest. Victoria seemed to ponder this for a minute. “What was it that you were going to say...?” Danny asked, less nervous, because he had already said what he needed to... Victoria got really nervous. She figured he would mention that he liked her, or something along the lines of that....Now she had to tell him something, and she didn't know how she was going to say this without looking like a complete idiot. She smiled nervously, looking around as she tried to figure out what she was going to say. Danny smiled at how nervous she looked. “It's alright. You don't need to be nervous...You wanted to say something. Just say it.” he said. She glared at him a little. “It's not that easy...” she said, in an almost snap. “Sorry...” he nervously smiled in apology. She sighed. “It's alright....Just....forget I wanted to say anything, okay?” she asked, standing up. She was pulled back down onto the couch, by Danny. “Me too...” he simply said. “....Me too?” she asked, wondering what he meant. “I like you too....” he said. She couldn't believe he could've gotten what she was trying to say. “How did you....-” “Believe me, your way to obvious...” Danny said, smirking. “Oh, shutup.” she said, elbowing him in the arm. “Why don't you make me?” he asked, the flirty tone in his voice, a wicked grin on his face. She looked from his eyes to his lips and back to his eyes as he leaned in to kiss her. He pressed his lips against hers, as she returned the kiss. As the kiss got deeper, she closed her eyes as her arms began to wrap around his neck. He began to lean forward, until he was on top of her....

“ Danny, mate, you in.....” Dougie stopped his sentence, as he walked in the door. “Now theres an image I didn't need to see...” he muttered, a little disgusted, as he saw the two wrapped up in a blanket on the couch, their clothes thrown in random places on the floor. “ Doug, where....” Harry's face slowly turned into a smirk. “Oohhh...lookie what we have here....” Harry said, laughing a little bit. “How can you smirk at this?!” Dougie asked, looking at Harry like he was crazy. “It was only a matter of time....” Harry said, laughing a little. Dougie and Harry's eyes widened as Victoria began to stir. Victoria rubbed her eyes and looked around a little. Her eyes widened as she saw Dougie and Harry, standing there. She hit Danny on the arm. “ Danny.” she hissed. “Wha...?” he muttered groggily, rubbing his eyes. He was still half-asleep as he looked in the direction Victoria was looking in. His eyes shot open, as he wrapped the covers around himself and her even more. “Guys....if you would...get out!” he said, really embarrassed. “Good luck with your second round...” Harry said, laughing as Dougie pulled him out.

Victoria had turned red, as she was trying to pick up her clothes while still laying on the couch. She was struggling to reach for her shirt, which was a little too far to reach. Danny smirked. “Here.” he said, rolling his eyes as he threw her his shirt. “Oh quit the smirk.” she said, as she pulled her pants on. She pulled his shirt on and then her socks. “Okay, good, I'm fully dressed.” she said, more to herself. “And what a shame it is...” he grinned cheekily as he pecked her on the lips. “Shut up you cheeky bastard.” she said, laughing a little, as she stood up. She ran her hands through her hair, trying to make herself look as if she hadn't just done that. Danny didn't care. He continued the way he was...Shirtless, in a satisfied, yet relaxed position, just clad in boxers, his hair a mess. Tom walked in slowly, his hands covering his eyes. “Is it all safe?” he asked. Victoria rolled her eyes. “Yes...” she grumbled. Tom laughed and uncovered his eyes. “So this is what you do to make-up....I mean, I've heard of kiss and make-up, but-” “Shut the fuck up Tom.” Victoria snapped, glaring at him as she sat next to Danny on the couch. Tom smiled. “Okay, okay, I'll stop...” Tom said, as Danny wrapped his arm around Victoria, to calm her down.

“So, are you guys a “thing” or what?” Harry asked. They were all seated in the guest room, for some random reason. Probably because no one really wanted to sit on the couch..... “Uh...I guess...” Victoria said. “I don't really know...are we?” she asked, laughing a little. “Uhm...I think so...” Danny muttered distractedly, focusing on a strand of her hair that he was playing with. “Well, you sound enthusiastic...” Dougie said sarcastically, laughing a bit. “Leave him alone.” Victoria said, smiling at Danny's cuteness, as she leaned back on his chest. “Ah...the hair went away...” Danny faked his sadness as he wrapped his arms around her. “Deal with it...” she said, getting comfortable. Danny grinned at her, as Harry, Dougie, and Tom rolled their eyes. They were already acting like a couple...

After a while, they were just sorta chilling there in the guest room. What they didn't hear, was the door open, as Fletch and Victoria's mum entered the house. “I wonder where Victoria and the others are...” Fletch said, curious. He hadn't really talked to McFly or Victoria since they got here, but he was hoping they got on well. He was about to find out that his niece was getting on a little too well with one of the guys. They looked in Victoria's room first. No one was there... Then they looked in the guest room, shocked at what they saw. Dougie, Harry, and Tom were just talking with Victoria and Danny were making out.

“ DANNY! GET YOUR HANDS OFF OF MY NIECE!!” Fletch boomed. Danny and Victoria jumped apart. Victoria and all the others looked at Fletch, wide-eyed. “Fletch...whats wrong with you?” Tom asked. “I thought I told you I didn't want any of you to do anything like that with my niece!” Fletch said, really angry. “ Vick, get your ass to your room now!” Victoria's mum snapped. “But Mum-” she began. “NOW!” she demanded. “I'm sorry Danny...” Victoria muttered, giving him a peck on the lips, before rushing out of the room. Fletch shut the door after Victoria and her mum left the room. “Fuck...” Danny muttered. He knew he was in for it....

Victoria was angry. Her mum had grounded her, took her Internet out, and worst of all, forbid her to talk to Danny or any of the guys. “Ugh....my stupid mum...” she grumbled, crossing her arms, as she leaned back on her bed....What was she going to do now?

After hearing an hour of Fletch's yelling, Danny was sick of it. Why did Fletch have to be so evil, so...demanding? Oh yeah, because he had that thing called a contract that said he couldn't talk back to anything he said. If only he had really read that contract....Then again, if he hadn't signed that contract, he wouldn't have had his band, and he wouldn't have met Victoria. Danny sighed, as all the guys looked and Fletch looked at him weirdly. Fletch was still yelling, Danny just remembered this. He had drowned out Fletch's yelling after a while, as he always did.....Now, all he needed to figure out, is how he was going to see Victoria without Fletch and Victoria's mum noticing....
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Post  Vick x Tue Feb 26, 2008 3:58 pm

Jordan|x wrote:
Vick x wrote:
Jordan|x wrote:
I just realized something...
Would I happen to be the Jordan in this?
Perhaps...
Haha.

Vick x wrote:Jordan and Harry were already making out, but that was only because Harry was a man-whore and Jordan was a slut, and they were both proud of it.

The Holy Hooker strikes again!
lmao

WOOP! xD
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Post  Jordan[: Tue Feb 26, 2008 4:01 pm

Vick x wrote:
Jordan|x wrote:
Vick x wrote:
Jordan|x wrote:
I just realized something...
Would I happen to be the Jordan in this?
Perhaps...
Haha.

Vick x wrote:Jordan and Harry were already making out, but that was only because Harry was a man-whore and Jordan was a slut, and they were both proud of it.

The Holy Hooker strikes again!
lmao

WOOP! xD

Haha we're amazing.
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Post  Vick x Tue Feb 26, 2008 4:04 pm

Jordan|x wrote:
Vick x wrote:
Jordan|x wrote:
Vick x wrote:
Jordan|x wrote:
I just realized something...
Would I happen to be the Jordan in this?
Perhaps...
Haha.

Vick x wrote:Jordan and Harry were already making out, but that was only because Harry was a man-whore and Jordan was a slut, and they were both proud of it.

The Holy Hooker strikes again!
lmao

WOOP! xD

Haha we're amazing.
Haha, yes.
Yes we are. Very Happy
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Post  Vick x Thu Feb 28, 2008 9:12 pm

-gasp-JORDAN!!! TIME TO HYPERVENTILATE!! CHAPTER 10!!!!! (:
Though....it's short and sucky...
Chapter 10
“Vick...” the soft whisper came. I jumped, afterr hearing my name and nearly screamed. This person covered my mouth. “Shut up, it's me.” he said in a quiet tone, laughing a little in the same manner. I sighed with relief. It was just Danny. “Well, don't scare me like that. It's 3 am...” I said quietly and tiredly, looking at the clock. “I'm calling you at 3 am and I'm, standing here right outside your door.” I added quickly in song. “Not the point. Why are you here?” I asked, looking at him now. Well, I couldn't really see him, due to the darkness. All I knew was that his shadow was in sitting form, so he must've been sitting on the bed or something. “Uh..to see you, duh.” Danny said. “At 3 am?” I asked, confused. He turned on the lamp that was on the nightstand, just so he could give me a look. Then I remembered...The “rules” that my mom and my uncle [and also Danny's manager], that had forbidden us from seeing each other. “Oh...” I said, giving him an apologetic grin. Danny rolled his eyes. “Yeah. Well, Ms. “Oh”, I've done quite a good job forging your handwriting, so that they don't open the door, and I've written myself a note. The guys'll know what's going on, but..they're not going to say anything, obviously..” Danny said. I rolled my eyes. “Duh...but anyway...What are we supposed to do at 3 am?” I asked. “Hmm...well, since I'm tired, and you're tired...we could just sleep...together.” Danny pulled a cheeky grin. I rolled my eyes and smiled. “Dirty jokes you're pulling now, huh?” I asked. “Maybe...but, not the point...” Danny said, laying down next to may, getting a bit comfortable under the covers. He wrapped his arms around me, pulling me closer to him. I sighed contently, comfortably. I loved being around someone who was warm...Especially someone who tended to put their arms around me...I smiled a little, and Danny turned my head and kissed me softly. “Goodnight.” he whispered, grinning. I smiled back and he released my head and returned his arms around my waist, where they should be. Or...at least, that's where I like them. It wasn't too hard to fall asleep, especially being as warm and comfortable that I was. When I easily drifted off to sleep, yesterday's events ran through my mind...How my mom had not chosen me to choose who and who I can't like, but my uncle! The one that I didn't talk to....I didn't like him much right now. Then I thought of what would happen when they saw the notes... Would my mom believe the note? I was sure that my dunce of an Uncle would believe pretty much anything...He was so gullible...But, my mom knew better...not that she knew my handwriting well, but maybe she could tell the difference, that wouldn't be good. But I tried to shake it off, tried to change my dream, but it wouldn't go away. Dreams are supposed to be a good thing. But I guess as a wise person once told me...okay, a guy on a television show....that dreams are a way of expressing what you are afraid of....and how you contemplate dealing with them. But, dreams sucked. I had a lot on my plate already, never mind dealing with idiotic dreams that are useless...I swear, if they yell at me one more time....they will just have to deal. Throughout the whole rest of my sleep, I tried to shake the thought from my mind...No use.

No Point Of View
Gone to get something to eat...see you later....
Danny.

Dougie laughed a little as he read the note. “How subtle...Fletch'll believe this in a second.” he said, smirking. “Yeah, I know.” Harry said. Tom just nodded in agreement, too tired to want to wake up. “Just nod and smile, Tom. Nod and smile.” Harry said, laughing a little. Tom was so tired, he didn't realize the sarcasm and did just that, before basically passing out on his bed. “Wow...” Dougie said, before him and Harry cracked up. Fletch walked in, looking weirdly at the three. “Where's Danny?” he asked, suddenly serious and a bit angry. Of course, that would be Fletch's first guess..All of them knew that. “Here, Danny left this note...” Dougie said, handing Fletch the note. Fletch read the one sentence. “Oh, alright, whatever.” Fletch said, shrugging. He then talked to Harry and Dougie for a few more minutes, before walking out. When the door closed, both sighed with relief. Then they cracked up again at the drool that was coming out of Tom's mouth, as a hornified smile was on his face. “Ew...Wet dream...didn't need to know that Tom...” Dougie said, to no one in particular. Harry laughed as the drool reached to his shirt.

Yeah...uh...Starbucks...Chara's...yay? Bye.
Victoria-ness..?

Jeanne laughed as she read the note. Her daughter was strange. “Yeah...Victoria left, too. She went to go drink Starbucks with Chara...” she said, shrugging. “Oh.” Fletch said, clearly uninterested as he stared at the TV screen. It was one of those dirty music videos, and Fletch, still being male as he was, was watching it with a slight grin. “Yeah, uh, you're what? 50? And you're staring at a 16 year old slut. Very mature, Matt, very mature..” Jeanne said. “Stupid Miley Cyrus...” she added, rolling her eyes. “Yeah, yeah, whatever. I'll do what I want.” Fletch said, not really caring what her sister had to input. Jeanne rolled her eyes. “Yeah, well since you're making me go all “safety patrol”, I just thought you'd like to know....Have a lovely day of watching Miley shake her ass and jiggle around her fake boobs.” she said, laughing a bit, before leaving to go to work.

“Danny...” Victoria said, shaking him lightly, trying to wake him up. “Whagerakdfajklfadf...” Danny muttered something that was supposed to be what, but ended up being unable to understand. “Come on Danny, wake up...” Victoria said, a little bit louder, in his ear. “Naga....” Danny grumbled, moving his hands around, as if trying to make the sound go away.”Ugh...this guy...” Victoria muttered under her breath. Then she got an idea. She smirked, then bit his lip a little. Danny suddenly found his awake side and grinned, getting ready to kiss her. “Uh-uh-uhh...Too late.” Victoria said, smirking as she pulled away from him, getting up. Danny frowned, opening his eyes and letting his mouth form into a pout. Victoria smirked wider. “You're so hot.” she said, laughing a little. “Too bad you wouldn't get up.” she added, shrugging. Danny pouted more, and she just shrugged as she walked into her bathroom to take a shower. When she got out, her hair was all wet and she was dressed in tight-ish black jeans, with a good fitting black tee shirt. Danny was still all disheveled, yawning. When she walked into the room, Danny ['s heart went boom] fake glared at her. “I'm still mad at you.” he said. Victoria grinned and shrugged. “I really don't care.” she said, laughing a little as she pecked him on the lips before walking down the stairs to get some breakfast. Thankfully, Fletch was too absorbed in the TV, and she got into the kitchen without getting caught. She took a bag of poptarts and put them in the microwave oven, waiting for them to heat up so that she could eat her deliciouso poptart-o. Danny walked in, and Fletch seemed to notice that and walked inside the kitchen, a bit annoyed that he had been pulled away from the 16-year old American slut that was Miley Cyrus. He was just in the middle of the “Not Daddy's Little Girl Anymore” chapter of her biography that was playing on TV, when he noticed Danny walk in the kitchen. Fletch watched Danny and Victoria, as they both took a glance at each other, frowning, then going back to what they were doing. Fletch, being dumb as he was, didn't even seem to notice. “So..Danny....you've been good, right?” he asked, treating Danny as if he was a child. “I'm not a fucking child Fletch, why can't I just date who I want?” Danny snapped back. He didn't want to be so mean, but he had to make his point across. “Because, Danny, she's my niece.” Fletch said. “So?! You let me go out with Matt!” Victoria exclaimed. “Well, Matt wasn't as bad-” “Wasn't as bad?! He was so much worse!” she cut him off. “I just don't want Danny to be a bad influence on you.” Fletch said. “I could understand if you were talking about Dougie, but Danny?!” Victoria yelled angrily. “I'm not discussing this anymore. You guys cannot be together, and that's it!” Fletch snapped angrily. “Yeah, go have fun watching 16 year old porn.” Victoria snapped. “I will!” Fletch yelled back, before storming back off into the other room. Danny sighed. “Guess we have to follow the rules...” he said, a frown forming on his face. “No....Now, this is war. I will not have my uncle treating me like a 10 year old. I'm not a little kid anymore....” Victoria said, seeming determined. “Vick, what are you planning?” Danny asked, getting a little nervous as he knew how determined Victoria was when she was angry and wanted to prove someone wrong. “You'll see...” Victoria said, as a smirk crept onto her face. She would get Fletch back, with her brilliant plan. The only setback to her plan...she needed to think of a plan.
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Post  Jordan[: Fri Feb 29, 2008 7:23 am

HEEHEEHAWWWWWHEEHEEHAWWHEEHEEHAWHAWHEEEEEEEEEHEEEEEEEEHAWWWWWWWWWW
Yeah, that was hyperventilation right there.^^

Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked
Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil
Whoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
Amazinggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
I love it.
Very Happy
Again, Miley Montana bit, lmao.
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Post  Vick x Fri Feb 29, 2008 12:42 pm

Jordan|x wrote:
HEEHEEHAWWWWWHEEHEEHAWWHEEHEEHAWHAWHEEEEEEEEEHEEEEEEEEHAWWWWWWWWWW
Yeah, that was hyperventilation right there.^^

Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked
Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil
Whoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
Amazinggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
I love it.
Very Happy
Again, Miley Montana bit, lmao.

Haha.
Thank you. (:
I figured I'd be nice and get that chapter in for you. hehe
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Post  Mileythesmiley Fri Feb 29, 2008 1:19 pm

WOOHOO! Very Happy
Great add. ^_^ I liked it.

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Post  DitteMcFLY Sun Mar 09, 2008 5:32 am

It's Really good, add some more soon?! Very Happy
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