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You don't care.
Mileythesmiley Sun Mar 02, 2008 2:49 am
Here's another one of my poems. ^_^
It's not that good, but I like it.
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I hate your smile.
I can’t take how you laugh.
I don’t like your smell.
Your humor makes me daft.
I hate how you fix your hair
and how I try making you see,
but the thing I hate the most
is how you don’t even care.
Because;
At me, your smile will never be faced.
It’ll never be me to make you laugh.
I’m not the reason you put on your aftershave
and I’ll never be the one you’ll try and impress.
For me, you will never do your hair
and won’t make me notice
although I do,
but you don’t even care.
It's not that good, but I like it.
--
I hate your smile.
I can’t take how you laugh.
I don’t like your smell.
Your humor makes me daft.
I hate how you fix your hair
and how I try making you see,
but the thing I hate the most
is how you don’t even care.
Because;
At me, your smile will never be faced.
It’ll never be me to make you laugh.
I’m not the reason you put on your aftershave
and I’ll never be the one you’ll try and impress.
For me, you will never do your hair
and won’t make me notice
although I do,
but you don’t even care.
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Re: You don't care.
Julesbox. Sun Mar 02, 2008 2:51 am
RIIIE! What are you talking about?!
It's seriously WICKEDLY AWESOME!
I love it, like über-much! <3
WRITE MORE! XD
It's seriously WICKEDLY AWESOME!
I love it, like über-much! <3
WRITE MORE! XD
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Re: You don't care.
Mileythesmiley Sun Mar 02, 2008 2:53 am
thank you, Juju.
I'm working on some more at the minute,
but I want them to be better, so
it might take a while.
but thank yooou
<3
I'm working on some more at the minute,
but I want them to be better, so
it might take a while.
but thank yooou
<3
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Re: You don't care.
Tanita (: Sun Mar 02, 2008 5:52 am
:O
I love it Maria!
This is really good.
It's exactly how I feel with my crushhhhhh.
(:
You are an amaizing writer!=D
I love it Maria!
This is really good.
It's exactly how I feel with my crushhhhhh.
(:
You are an amaizing writer!=D
Tanita (:- Number of posts : 1708
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Re: You don't care.
Mileythesmiley Sun Mar 02, 2008 5:54 am
thank you!
<3
yeah, that was sort of my inspiration.
When you like someone, but they don't feel the same. ^_^
<3
yeah, that was sort of my inspiration.
When you like someone, but they don't feel the same. ^_^
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Re: You don't care.
Shattered Dreamer Mon Apr 07, 2008 4:41 pm
This is exactly how I feel about the guy I'm like in love with.
Awesome poem, I LOVE it!!!!
I can't wait to read more of your's!
Awesome poem, I LOVE it!!!!
I can't wait to read more of your's!
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