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Post  Shattered Dreamer on Thu Apr 03, 2008 8:44 pm

Raindrops fall to the ground
A young girl cries without a sound
The clouds are turning gray
She’s almost lost, gone astray

The skies are looking grave
To sin she’s become a slave
It’s no clearer up ahead
She wishes she was dead

The weather remains ill
She’s suffering life’s chill
The storms not settling down
Parents gone, out of town

Today it’s not so cold
But her life seems so old
Weather’s better, still no sun
Feeling worthless she grabs a gun

The storm’s almost gone
She can’t keep holding on
Sun’s slowly rising
Life she’s despising

The golden sun is getting bigger
She lays her finger on the trigger
Throws the gun to the right
Signs of the storm are gone
Out of sight
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Post  Jordan[: on Thu Apr 03, 2008 8:46 pm

I.
Just.
Died.

OH MY GOD.
THAT'S... THAT'S... No word for it man.
:O!
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Post  Tanita (: on Sun Apr 06, 2008 2:25 pm

I agree with Jordan.
No words.
Seriously
That was amazing.
I'm speechless.
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