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Post  Julesbox. on Fri Apr 04, 2008 5:29 am



I was bored today, i'm home from schoooooool. So i wrote a poem, kinda long? Dunno. Anyways, tell me what you think guys.

I'm sitting on my bed,
just waiting for the day to go by,
I wonder if it's true what you said,
' I will love you until i die ',

You are the smile on my face,
you are the sun on the sky,
you are the tear i can trace,
you are a bird that can fly,
you are the brightest star on the sky tonight,
bring me wherever so i only have you in sight,

The sound of your laughter lingers in my ears,
a image of your eyes sets my gaze,
you take away all of my fears,
you make me laugh on the darkest days,

In the corner of my eye i see something that reminds me of you,
a rainbow in the brightest shade of blue,

You will forever be the brightest star in my life.
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Re: Brightest Star

Post  Mileythesmiley on Fri Apr 04, 2008 12:41 pm

ooohhh...
... Shocked

That was amazing, Jules. <3
Seriously! It was a master POO!



Yes, I am now making 'poo' a positive word, too! ^_^
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Post  Julesbox. on Sat Apr 05, 2008 7:32 am

Mileythesmiley wrote:ooohhh...
... Shocked

That was amazing, Jules. <3
Seriously! It was a master POO!



Yes, I am now making 'poo' a positive word, too! ^_^
Obey, or poo! Twisted Evil



Hahaha. Thanks Masterrr Poo! <3 (:
ILY <3
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Re: Brightest Star

Post  Jordan[: on Sat Apr 05, 2008 10:54 am

:O!
What... how?!
I DIDN'T COMMENT?!
Ahhhh
AMAZING
AWESOME
BRILLIANT
...
I can't think of anymore words...
But you get the point Very Happy
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Re: Brightest Star

Post  Tanita (: on Sun Apr 06, 2008 2:29 pm

...
Ama to the zing.
haha
That was, no IS one of the best poems I've ever read!
Screw all the famous poetry people, you guys on here are WAY better than them!=D
I'll go kill them and you can-
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I love it Cheese.
And I love you<3
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