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Post  Jordan[: on Wed May 21, 2008 8:19 am

You put me on the back burner.
Just so you could get a little further.
Something is wrong with this picture.
It seems to be a depressing mixture.
You wanna go back to seventeen.
Wish it all to be a dream.

The hills are tuning to mountains.
The sprinklers to fountains.
And here you wonder,
where is the thunder?

You feel the lightning.
Striking you from every way.
Does it ever get frightening?
All this time in the skyway,
You can never run away.

There you are, above it all.
We wait for you to fall.
Just fall from your place.
Forget about her face.
The one that haunts your mind.
So bad that you left it all behind.
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Post  Shattered Dreamer on Wed May 21, 2008 9:01 am

That was... affraid
Oh my gosh.
Wow.
Wow.
Wow.
Wow.
I love it...
I think this is one of your best.
Wow.
Wow.
I dunno what else to say but...
WOW!!!!!!!!!!
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Post  Music* on Thu May 22, 2008 8:49 am

This is like...

...really amazing!

Wow!

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