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Ordinary Day
Julesbox. Tue Mar 25, 2008 7:50 am
I decided to write a S/A for Tanita. To TRY to cheer her up. I don't care if i don't succeed, i just wanted to write this for her. I got the idea from the song 'Ordinary Day' by Vanessa Carlton.
It's a really really really short one, but i hoe you'll like it anyways.
- - -
As i watched the boy of my dreams stand on the hill with his eyes attached on the sky, the feeling came back. The same gutting feeling i felt when he told me he was leaving. Leaving his home town, and me behind, to pursue his dream. I know it sounds selfish but i just can't help it. I've loved him ever since my boyfriend dumped me. The same night Dougie comforted me, held me in his arms and told me everything would be okay. I remember every single word he said.
"You deserve someone who will love you with all of his heart, who will give up everything just to make you happy, someone who wont ever hurt you, and those who hurt you he'll rip in pieces, someone who will take you wherever you want to go"
Everytime i think of those words i remember how much i love him. I can't help but to feel this way, he makes me laugh when i'm sad, he makes me feel calm when i'm crying, he makes me feel complete.
"What are you looking at?" I asked softly as i approached to the hill. His sparkling eyes looked into mine, sending shivers down my spine. He took my hand in his and glanced up to the sky again.
"You know i don't want to leave, right?" He ignored my question and lied down. I sat down and watched his eyes move as the clouds went by.
"Then why are you?" I said, feeling his hand taking a stronger grip around mine. I smiled to myself as he closed his eyes.
" 'Cause i can't stay here, when i love someone who doesn't love me back" He whispered. I felt the warm summer breeze come by as i lied down next to him, placing my head on his stomach.
"How do you know she doesn't love you back?" I asked, looking at the sky. I felt his fragrance find it's way to my nostrils and i sighed.
"She couldn't love me..She's too perfect" He replied. I shook my head and sat back up. My hair laid on my shoulders, revealing my teary eyes as i gazed into his.
"Who said you're not perfect?" I smiled pulling my legs close to my body. Dougie sat up, with a flower in his hand and shook his head cautiously.
"Take my hand" He said reaching out for it. I did as he said and kept my eyes locked with his.
"Will you come with me? I can't do this alone. I need you to be by my side" He spoke watching a tear roll down my sunburnt cheek. I couldn't speak, i couldn't breath. Did the boy of my dreams just say he 'needs me'?
"You could say something.." Dougie chuckled with a smile on. I just nodded, and threw myself around his neck. This was beyond happiness. This was more than i could ever explain.
"I'm not perfect...you are" I whispered before kissing him with all the lust and love i felt for him.
It's a really really really short one, but i hoe you'll like it anyways.
- - -
As i watched the boy of my dreams stand on the hill with his eyes attached on the sky, the feeling came back. The same gutting feeling i felt when he told me he was leaving. Leaving his home town, and me behind, to pursue his dream. I know it sounds selfish but i just can't help it. I've loved him ever since my boyfriend dumped me. The same night Dougie comforted me, held me in his arms and told me everything would be okay. I remember every single word he said.
"You deserve someone who will love you with all of his heart, who will give up everything just to make you happy, someone who wont ever hurt you, and those who hurt you he'll rip in pieces, someone who will take you wherever you want to go"
Everytime i think of those words i remember how much i love him. I can't help but to feel this way, he makes me laugh when i'm sad, he makes me feel calm when i'm crying, he makes me feel complete.
"What are you looking at?" I asked softly as i approached to the hill. His sparkling eyes looked into mine, sending shivers down my spine. He took my hand in his and glanced up to the sky again.
"You know i don't want to leave, right?" He ignored my question and lied down. I sat down and watched his eyes move as the clouds went by.
"Then why are you?" I said, feeling his hand taking a stronger grip around mine. I smiled to myself as he closed his eyes.
" 'Cause i can't stay here, when i love someone who doesn't love me back" He whispered. I felt the warm summer breeze come by as i lied down next to him, placing my head on his stomach.
"How do you know she doesn't love you back?" I asked, looking at the sky. I felt his fragrance find it's way to my nostrils and i sighed.
"She couldn't love me..She's too perfect" He replied. I shook my head and sat back up. My hair laid on my shoulders, revealing my teary eyes as i gazed into his.
"Who said you're not perfect?" I smiled pulling my legs close to my body. Dougie sat up, with a flower in his hand and shook his head cautiously.
"Take my hand" He said reaching out for it. I did as he said and kept my eyes locked with his.
"Will you come with me? I can't do this alone. I need you to be by my side" He spoke watching a tear roll down my sunburnt cheek. I couldn't speak, i couldn't breath. Did the boy of my dreams just say he 'needs me'?
"You could say something.." Dougie chuckled with a smile on. I just nodded, and threw myself around his neck. This was beyond happiness. This was more than i could ever explain.
"I'm not perfect...you are" I whispered before kissing him with all the lust and love i felt for him.
I love you Tanita <3
Julesbox.- Number of posts : 378
Age : 29
Location : Swedeeeeeen
Registration date : 2008-02-20
Re: Ordinary Day
Jordan[: Tue Mar 25, 2008 7:56 am
Cheeseeeeeeeeeeeee
Cheeseeeeeeeeeeeee
Cheesey Cheese
Cheesemyster
...
I loveeee it<3
Cheeseeeeeeeeeeeee
Cheesey Cheese
Cheesemyster
...
I loveeee it<3
Jordan[:- Number of posts : 1797
Age : 30
Location : Florida
Registration date : 2008-02-18
Re: Ordinary Day
Tanita (: Tue Mar 25, 2008 7:58 am
Cheese, I'm crying now.
That was amaizing.
You made me smile<3
Thank you.
I love you<3
That was amaizing.
You made me smile<3
Thank you.
I love you<3
Tanita (:- Number of posts : 1708
Age : 31
Location : Loser land.
Registration date : 2008-02-18
Re: Ordinary Day
Julesbox. Tue Mar 25, 2008 7:59 am
Jordiee wrote:Cheeseeeeeeeeeeeee
Cheeseeeeeeeeeeeee
Cheesey Cheese
Cheesemyster
...
I loveeee it<3
Thanks Waffley Wafflerrr!
I love YOU! <3 ^^
I love YOU! <3 ^^
Julesbox.- Number of posts : 378
Age : 29
Location : Swedeeeeeen
Registration date : 2008-02-20
Re: Ordinary Day
Julesbox. Tue Mar 25, 2008 8:00 am
Tanita (: wrote:Cheese, I'm crying now.
That was amaizing.
You made me smile<3
Thank you.
I love you<3
Sweetie...I love you <3 Thank you so much
I made you smile! That's wicked!
Julesbox.- Number of posts : 378
Age : 29
Location : Swedeeeeeen
Registration date : 2008-02-20
Re: Ordinary Day
Jordan[: Tue Mar 25, 2008 11:58 am
xXCheeserrr wrote:Jordiee wrote:Cheeseeeeeeeeeeeee
Cheeseeeeeeeeeeeee
Cheesey Cheese
Cheesemyster
...
I loveeee it<3Thanks Waffley Wafflerrr!
I love YOU! <3 ^^
I LOVE YOU TOO!<3
Jordan[:- Number of posts : 1797
Age : 30
Location : Florida
Registration date : 2008-02-18
Re: Ordinary Day
Mileythesmiley Tue Mar 25, 2008 1:26 pm
That was sweet, Jules.
Seriously brilliant!
I loved it.
<3
Seriously brilliant!
I loved it.
<3
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Re: Ordinary Day
Julesbox. Tue Mar 25, 2008 1:34 pm
Mileythesmiley wrote:That was sweet, Jules.
Seriously brilliant!
I loved it.
<3
Aww, thank you <3
Julesbox.- Number of posts : 378
Age : 29
Location : Swedeeeeeen
Registration date : 2008-02-20
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