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Wishing by Bodil

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Post  Bsangel Sat Oct 11, 2008 8:21 am

I am not completely sure, that this is done, but Mia is breathing down my neck (Twisted Evil yes I am) atm, so I gotta do what she says.

Wishing

Once I wished
I was all alone
With no friends
And no family
Nobody
to hurt me when they’re gone

Twice I wished
Nobody knew me
So that day
I turn to dust
Nobody
Would be hurt and suffer

But I’ve never
Wished for you to go
Without me.
Your embrace,
Warm and safe,
Makes all the pain worthwhile
Bsangel
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Post  Jordan[: Sat Oct 11, 2008 9:40 am

Oooh. I like it. Smile
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Post  Bsangel Sat Oct 11, 2008 10:21 am

Jordlancer wrote:
Oooh. I like it. Smile

Thanx Very Happy Do you think it is complete or do you get the feeling, that something is missing?
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Post  Jordan[: Sat Oct 11, 2008 10:27 am

I think its good how it is.
But if you think like, something's missing, maybe play around with it a bit?
See what you come up with?
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Post  Bsangel Sat Oct 11, 2008 10:55 am

Okay thanx. I will try. Need Mia to go home first though, but then I'll try
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Post  Emma-xxx Tue Oct 14, 2008 12:38 am

me likes it too Very Happy


og yeah, and Kæk,
as one of the writing-gods,
would you take a look at some of mine and tell me what you think?
Very Happy
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Post  Bsangel Tue Oct 14, 2008 2:15 am

hehe thanks and of course ;P Smile
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Post  Emma-xxx Wed Oct 15, 2008 12:36 am

You are so very welcome
and thank you xD
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