Tell me..
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Tell me..
Tell me why you're always on my mind.
Tell why you don't feel the same.
Tell me what to do, what to say
and what to wear when you're around.
Tell me where to find your heart and how to win it.
Tell me your secrets.
Tell me. Tell me.
Tell why you don't feel the same.
Tell me what to do, what to say
and what to wear when you're around.
Tell me where to find your heart and how to win it.
Tell me your secrets.
Tell me. Tell me.
Random fact: When I wrote this, I actually thought it rhymed.
It wasn't until I was done, I realised it didn't. >_>
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DUDE!
That's amazing <3
I love it.
And poems don't have to rhyme... Do they?
That's amazing <3
I love it.
And poems don't have to rhyme... Do they?
Jordan[:- Number of posts : 1797
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xxJordanxx wrote:DUDE!
That's amazing <3
I love it.
And poems don't have to rhyme... Do they?
aaaw, thank you so much.
and no, they don't.
but I intended to with this one,
without luck. xD
and no, they don't.
but I intended to with this one,
without luck. xD
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Haha yeah I attempt too, and I'll be like
AHA! IT RHYMES!
Then I read it. -.-
Hahaha
AHA! IT RHYMES!
Then I read it. -.-
Hahaha
Jordan[:- Number of posts : 1797
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Miley wrote:Yeah. xD
I think I want to write one nooooow. ^_^
Haha I can only write at night, or when I'm feeling really depressed -.-
Jordan[:- Number of posts : 1797
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This is amaizing!
I wish I could write as good as you and Jordan-.-
I really like it!(:
I wish I could write as good as you and Jordan-.-
I really like it!(:
Tanita (:- Number of posts : 1708
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thank you!!
You can just try. You'll getter better with time
That's how I started,
and I still suck. XD
seriously, a few days ago I found my first poem I made about two years ago, and it was crap! Like a gigantic monster poo!
ahaha.
You can just try. You'll getter better with time
That's how I started,
and I still suck. XD
seriously, a few days ago I found my first poem I made about two years ago, and it was crap! Like a gigantic monster poo!
ahaha.
Re: Tell me..
You don't suck!
You're really good!
Believe me,
I've tried for years.
I'm just not a poetic person I guess.
xP
You're really good!
Believe me,
I've tried for years.
I'm just not a poetic person I guess.
xP
Tanita (:- Number of posts : 1708
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You don't suck!
You'd know if you did.
Cos see, you wouldn't actually be able to write a poem if you sucked.
haha
Plus I'd have told you, even if I've only known you for a day.
I am... ehm... rudely blunt.
You'd know if you did.
Cos see, you wouldn't actually be able to write a poem if you sucked.
haha
Plus I'd have told you, even if I've only known you for a day.
I am... ehm... rudely blunt.
Jordan[:- Number of posts : 1797
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Jordan[:- Number of posts : 1797
Age : 30
Location : Florida
Registration date : 2008-02-18
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MARIAAAAAA! I loved ittt! Like big time! <3
You have to write more!
Seriously wicked...I still can't get over it! Haha
xX:.
You have to write more!
Seriously wicked...I still can't get over it! Haha
xX:.
Julesbox.- Number of posts : 378
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Location : Swedeeeeeen
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I LOVE it!!!!! It's really amazing!!
And stop all that 'I'm not good' thingy, 'cause we all know it isn't true dx you're really, REALLY good!!! xD
- I remember the first poem dx damn that made me laugh., it wasn't that bad, I just found it really funny xD
AND IT RHYMED xD
And stop all that 'I'm not good' thingy, 'cause we all know it isn't true dx you're really, REALLY good!!! xD
- I remember the first poem dx damn that made me laugh., it wasn't that bad, I just found it really funny xD
AND IT RHYMED xD
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wow...I love this poem, i can totally connect to it. -sigh-
great job!!!
great job!!!
Shattered Dreamer- Number of posts : 91
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