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Post  goldfishbrain Fri Mar 21, 2008 3:52 pm

Title: Never ever
author: Sara, tha goldfish!
summary: dougie falls in love with his best friends but she doesent like him back. is he ever going to date his favourite girl ?
rating: uhm dunno.. 13+ maybe.
warnings: some swearing, alcohol, sex dunno .. xD So im not American or English so im sorry for all the spelling mystakes please dont hate me.. and i dunno have fat i can add more.. We have like a trailer filled with homework .xD

Never ever.

The boy and the girl also called Dougie and Stine walked side by side down the road. They we’re both graduation students and best friends. Dougie looked at the brownhaired girl.
“what?” She asked
“would you like..” he paused. “to go out on a date with me?”
“Dougie.. Please dont” she said.
“why not?”
“because you know the ansewer is no” she said and started to walk faster. Dougie stopped and let her walk. Why didnt she want to go out with her? His been in love with her for 5 years. And everytime he tried the answer was no. Stine disaperred around the corner and he start to walk again. The big school building was filled up with teenagers who thought they we’re something. Dougie opned his locker and looked for his english books.
“their not there” a voice behind him said. He turned around and faced Danny his best friend.
“oh why not?” He asked.
“ because their here” Danny said and handled them to Dougie.
“ thanks mate” Dougie said and smiled before they walked to class.

After a day at school Stine sat in her room with a magazine and the phone rang.
“hello?”
“Hey, its Sara!”
“oh hey”
“so i was just wondering.. whats up with you and Dougie?” She asked with a sly voice.
“ah.. nothing?”
“oh because you kinda ignored him the whole school day.”
“he asked me out again.”
“again?”
“Yeah..”
“why dont you just do it?” sara asked
“Because that would totally ruin our friendship!”
“its allready ruind”
“What?”
“its allready ruind. Hallo, you have turned him down 6 times now!”
“yeah, i dont wanna date him. Its just i dont like him that way.”
“yeah right” sara said. “i got to go, bye!” biipp.
Stine lied down in her bed again. “damn it” she said before she fell asleep.

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Post  Mileythesmiley Fri Mar 21, 2008 4:00 pm

I WANT MORE!
sorry..

I really like it so far. ^_^
actually sounds like an idea i had for a fic. (:
It's great!

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Post  Jordan[: Fri Mar 21, 2008 4:34 pm

Mileythesmiley wrote:
I WANT MORE!
sorry..

I really like it so far. ^_^
actually sounds like an idea i had for a fic. (:
It's great!


i told you.
I told you.
I TOLD YOU.
I. TOLD. YOU!
Very Happy
I loveeeeee it.
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Post  goldfishbrain Sun Apr 13, 2008 12:39 pm

Sorrry it took so long. xD

well here you go.
its really bad.. xD i was in a bad mood.

The sun hit Stine’s eyes 7 am as always. She rised up and walked to her closet. She found her favourite Jeans and a tank top. After a quick breakfest she walked to school. Alone. We’re the hell was Douge? She thought to herself all the way to school.
When she came to school she met Danny.
“Hey!” she said. “where the hell is Dougie today?”
“i dont know” He replied. “home or something.”
“oh okey.” She said befor walking to class.

After school she went to Dougie’s place. She rang on the doorbell. No answer. The door was open so she walked in.
“hallo?” she said out in the air. Still no answer. Stine walked up to Dougie’s bedroom and opned the door. “dougie?” she whispered.
“get out!” he said back. The room was all dark. She ignored his answer and walked in.
“where have you been today?” she asked.
“here!” he said rude back.
“oh okey.. Why?”
“Because of you!” he said and lied down in his bed.
“me?”
“yeah! I cant stand being at school because youre there! I cant help it, you’re the one and you don’t want me! i wake up everyday and walk o school with you. I look at you in a way that.. i cant describe and you don’t look that way back. I just.. i dont know!”
“Dougie..”
“No! Get the hell out of here”
Stine turned around and walked out of the room and ran back home.

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Post  Jordan[: Sun Apr 13, 2008 3:20 pm

Love it Sara Very Happy
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Post  goldfishbrain Sun Apr 13, 2008 3:44 pm

Jordiee wrote:
Love it Sara Very Happy

Thanks Very Happy
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