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Daddy Would Do Anything [15+]
Title: Daddy Would Do Anything
By: Me, Neny (Music*)
Rating/Warnings: 15+, the entire fic is one big warning! It's not a lovey-dovey fiction but I don't wanna give away to much here by warning you for everything! If there are really bad things in a chapter I will put a warning above it! Deal?
Summary: Amy is a girl with a lot of problems, she doesn't want to stay with her mother anymore and goes off to live with her father who she's never met before...
Further: Soooooo, I'm posting this because Tanita asked for it! You might know it from D'fied!
Daddy would do anything
1.
‘’Amy, you can’t keep doing this!’’ My mother yelled at me. I didn’t get it, why did she care? It was my body, my mind, my soul. Who wouldn’t use some if they were in my position? All the girls whining about hím every day and about the rest of the band. I hated him and I definitely hated McFly. My mother made a big mistake when she was sixteen, she slept with Danny Jones. Yes, thé Danny Jones and off course she got pregnant. She wanted to give him his freedom back so she dumped him and raised me by herself. Now I am sixteen years old and pretty messed up, lets introduce myself; Hi, I’m Amy and I’m a junkie.
By: Me, Neny (Music*)
Rating/Warnings: 15+, the entire fic is one big warning! It's not a lovey-dovey fiction but I don't wanna give away to much here by warning you for everything! If there are really bad things in a chapter I will put a warning above it! Deal?
Summary: Amy is a girl with a lot of problems, she doesn't want to stay with her mother anymore and goes off to live with her father who she's never met before...
Further: Soooooo, I'm posting this because Tanita asked for it! You might know it from D'fied!
Daddy would do anything
1.
‘’Amy, you can’t keep doing this!’’ My mother yelled at me. I didn’t get it, why did she care? It was my body, my mind, my soul. Who wouldn’t use some if they were in my position? All the girls whining about hím every day and about the rest of the band. I hated him and I definitely hated McFly. My mother made a big mistake when she was sixteen, she slept with Danny Jones. Yes, thé Danny Jones and off course she got pregnant. She wanted to give him his freedom back so she dumped him and raised me by herself. Now I am sixteen years old and pretty messed up, lets introduce myself; Hi, I’m Amy and I’m a junkie.
Last edited by Music* on Mon Apr 28, 2008 12:13 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Daddy Would Do Anything [15+]
Ah, I love you:D
And I love this story!
(:
Bababa, the ending is best.
haha
And I love this story!
(:
Bababa, the ending is best.
haha
Tanita (:- Number of posts : 1708
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Re: Daddy Would Do Anything [15+]
Oh my god!
Yes, yes, yes!
I LOVE this fic SO much!!!
It is SO GOOD!
Anyone who hasn't read this,
GET STARTED DUDES,
'cause this one FUCKIN ROCKS!
yeah!
By the way,
I love the last line..
Hi, I'm Amy, and I'm a junkie...
it's so great!
dx
Yes, yes, yes!
I LOVE this fic SO much!!!
It is SO GOOD!
Anyone who hasn't read this,
GET STARTED DUDES,
'cause this one FUCKIN ROCKS!
yeah!
By the way,
I love the last line..
Hi, I'm Amy, and I'm a junkie...
it's so great!
dx
Re: Daddy Would Do Anything [15+]
My face when I saw this on here.
I've read it on dfied.
Probably never commented but, now I shall read it again.
And comment.
Even though it will be crappy comments.
MOVING ON,
I LOVE THIS.
Can't wait for more
Jordan[:- Number of posts : 1797
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Re: Daddy Would Do Anything [15+]
Hahahaaa!
Me is smiling right now! ->
You guys are crazy for reading this again!!!
Next Chapterrrrrrrrrrrrr!
2.
‘’I’m leaving!’’ I told her while I was packing my stuff. ‘’No, you’re not leaving!’’ She said firmly. ‘’And why not?’’ I asked her. She left my room quickly, she knew I was high and didn’t care about what she was saying. Ten minutes later she came back into my room and looked at me intensely. ‘’I’ll let you leave but only under one condition,’’ she said. ‘’Spill it!’’ ‘’You’ll go and live with your father,’’ she said. I looked at her, I was shocked and had to think about this. The guy I’ve never met, celebrity, music I hated. ‘’Okay, deal!’’ I said firmly. He was a celebrity and away most of the time. Paradise, baby!
Me is smiling right now! ->
You guys are crazy for reading this again!!!
Next Chapterrrrrrrrrrrrr!
2.
‘’I’m leaving!’’ I told her while I was packing my stuff. ‘’No, you’re not leaving!’’ She said firmly. ‘’And why not?’’ I asked her. She left my room quickly, she knew I was high and didn’t care about what she was saying. Ten minutes later she came back into my room and looked at me intensely. ‘’I’ll let you leave but only under one condition,’’ she said. ‘’Spill it!’’ ‘’You’ll go and live with your father,’’ she said. I looked at her, I was shocked and had to think about this. The guy I’ve never met, celebrity, music I hated. ‘’Okay, deal!’’ I said firmly. He was a celebrity and away most of the time. Paradise, baby!
Last edited by Music* on Mon Apr 28, 2008 12:12 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Daddy Would Do Anything [15+]
Haha, kidding.
Even though that's my favorite chapter, the last one(:
Anyways, for the one you just added:
Danny timeeeeee
haha
I love it.
(:
And yes, I am crazy.
But not for reading it again(:
...that didn't make sense.
haha
=)
Tanita (:- Number of posts : 1708
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Re: Daddy Would Do Anything [15+]
^^ You're a bad girl Tanita!
Hahahaaaa
Danny timeee!
I'll add again later today!
Hahahaaaa
Danny timeee!
I'll add again later today!
Music*- Number of posts : 143
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Re: Daddy Would Do Anything [15+]
Me?
Haha, noo, I'mnot a bad girl.
Haha, noo, I'm
Tanita (:- Number of posts : 1708
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Re: Daddy Would Do Anything [15+]
I'll make all my adds blue!
3.
Two days later I was standing in front of his huge house and I was kind off doubting if I should do this. ‘’Can I help you?’’ I heard coming from the neighbours’ house. I walked a few steps in the guy’s direction. Oh god it was the bass player guy, the one all the girls are in love with. ‘’You’re Dougie right?’’ I asked him. ‘’Yep, what do you want?’’ he asked me and he took a sip from his drink. ‘’I’m looking for Danny, you know if he is home?’’ I asked. ‘’No he’s not home, he’s at mine!’’ He answered laughing while pointing at his house. ‘’Great they all live in the same street,’’ I mumbled. ‘’I heard you!’’ He said grinning. Okay, I didn’t like this one. ‘’Can you get him for me?’’ I asked. ‘’Hahaha, isn’t he a bit old for you?’’ He laughed. Okay, I hated him already, he is so annoying. I fell down on the grass and lighted a joint, I had put it in my pocket just to have something with me. It made me feel safe, secure. ‘’Just get the guy okay!’’ I now yelled. ‘’Get who?’’ I suddenly heard coming from the house. Two other guys walked outside, one holding a little girl and the other one a little boy. ‘’Oooh visitor!’’ he said cheekily and let go of the boy who ran back inside immediately. All right, was he flirting with me? ‘’I don’t think it’s healthy that you’re flirting with someone half your age,’’ I mumbled and got up. He and the other two started to laugh and that caused the fourth member to come outside carrying the little boy. ‘’The chick doesn’t think I should flirt with girls half my age,’’ he laughed. ‘’Oooh, being the funny one? No, I don’t think it’s healthy especially not because it kind off would be, how do they call it…Incest!’’ I said and lighted another joint. A woman came outside with another kid, a girl and soon all three of them were running around the grass.
3.
Two days later I was standing in front of his huge house and I was kind off doubting if I should do this. ‘’Can I help you?’’ I heard coming from the neighbours’ house. I walked a few steps in the guy’s direction. Oh god it was the bass player guy, the one all the girls are in love with. ‘’You’re Dougie right?’’ I asked him. ‘’Yep, what do you want?’’ he asked me and he took a sip from his drink. ‘’I’m looking for Danny, you know if he is home?’’ I asked. ‘’No he’s not home, he’s at mine!’’ He answered laughing while pointing at his house. ‘’Great they all live in the same street,’’ I mumbled. ‘’I heard you!’’ He said grinning. Okay, I didn’t like this one. ‘’Can you get him for me?’’ I asked. ‘’Hahaha, isn’t he a bit old for you?’’ He laughed. Okay, I hated him already, he is so annoying. I fell down on the grass and lighted a joint, I had put it in my pocket just to have something with me. It made me feel safe, secure. ‘’Just get the guy okay!’’ I now yelled. ‘’Get who?’’ I suddenly heard coming from the house. Two other guys walked outside, one holding a little girl and the other one a little boy. ‘’Oooh visitor!’’ he said cheekily and let go of the boy who ran back inside immediately. All right, was he flirting with me? ‘’I don’t think it’s healthy that you’re flirting with someone half your age,’’ I mumbled and got up. He and the other two started to laugh and that caused the fourth member to come outside carrying the little boy. ‘’The chick doesn’t think I should flirt with girls half my age,’’ he laughed. ‘’Oooh, being the funny one? No, I don’t think it’s healthy especially not because it kind off would be, how do they call it…Incest!’’ I said and lighted another joint. A woman came outside with another kid, a girl and soon all three of them were running around the grass.
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Re: Daddy Would Do Anything [15+]
ahahaha
I love this part.
It's funny(:
First time I read it I cracked up.
Haha
xD
I love this part.
It's funny(:
First time I read it I cracked up.
Haha
xD
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Re: Daddy Would Do Anything [15+]
Thanks Tanitaaaa
Next add, for youuuu <3
4.
‘’Who are you?’’ The boy asked. ‘’I’m Amy and what’s your name?’’ I said while putting out my hand. He shook it and told me his name was James and the two girls were Hannah and Emma, his sisters. ‘’Nice to meet you!’’ I said smiling. ‘’Your cigarette smells weird, not like daddy’s cigarettes,’’ James said. I quickly looked at the grownups who were staring at me and I saw the woman getting a cell phone out of her pocket. ‘’I’m going to talk to your daddy and the rest for a sec okay?’’ I asked James and he nodded. ‘’Which one is your daddy? And is that your mommy?’’ I asked him. He nodded and pointed at the drummer guy, right. I got up and walked towards the house. I stood still and pointed at the cell phone, the woman lifted it up immediately. ‘’No need to call the police, I’m not dangerous’’ I grinned. ‘’Could you put that out and explain what you are doing here or just leave,’’ the woman said. ‘’These are really expensive, I’m not going to put it out,’’ I said firmly. ‘’Okay, who are you and what do you want. You a crazed fan or something?’’ The woman asked me. I started to laugh hysterically, a fan. Hahaha, yeah sure. ‘’Puh-lease, a fan? Definitely not, I don’t listen to crappy music. Sorry!’’ I laughed. ‘’I’m going to call the police,’’ the woman said and started dialling a number. ‘’Don’t think my daddy wants to pick me up at the police station,’’ I sighed. The guys started to laugh and walked towards me, this was getting kind off intimidating.
Next add, for youuuu <3
4.
‘’Who are you?’’ The boy asked. ‘’I’m Amy and what’s your name?’’ I said while putting out my hand. He shook it and told me his name was James and the two girls were Hannah and Emma, his sisters. ‘’Nice to meet you!’’ I said smiling. ‘’Your cigarette smells weird, not like daddy’s cigarettes,’’ James said. I quickly looked at the grownups who were staring at me and I saw the woman getting a cell phone out of her pocket. ‘’I’m going to talk to your daddy and the rest for a sec okay?’’ I asked James and he nodded. ‘’Which one is your daddy? And is that your mommy?’’ I asked him. He nodded and pointed at the drummer guy, right. I got up and walked towards the house. I stood still and pointed at the cell phone, the woman lifted it up immediately. ‘’No need to call the police, I’m not dangerous’’ I grinned. ‘’Could you put that out and explain what you are doing here or just leave,’’ the woman said. ‘’These are really expensive, I’m not going to put it out,’’ I said firmly. ‘’Okay, who are you and what do you want. You a crazed fan or something?’’ The woman asked me. I started to laugh hysterically, a fan. Hahaha, yeah sure. ‘’Puh-lease, a fan? Definitely not, I don’t listen to crappy music. Sorry!’’ I laughed. ‘’I’m going to call the police,’’ the woman said and started dialling a number. ‘’Don’t think my daddy wants to pick me up at the police station,’’ I sighed. The guys started to laugh and walked towards me, this was getting kind off intimidating.
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Re: Daddy Would Do Anything [15+]
Ihh
JAMES!
I'm gonna marry him!
He's adorable.
I love him.
<3
JAMES!
I'm gonna marry him!
He's adorable.
I love him.
<3
Tanita (:- Number of posts : 1708
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Re: Daddy Would Do Anything [15+]
More,, more, more!!!!
I love this fic..
uhm, noo..
I'M gonna marry James...
I love this fic..
uhm, noo..
I'M gonna marry James...
Re: Daddy Would Do Anything [15+]
ahahaha
No
He's mine!
I said it first here AND on Dfied.
HA!
IN YOUR FACE!
...
haha
But seriosuly.
He's mine.
No
He's mine!
I said it first here AND on Dfied.
HA!
IN YOUR FACE!
...
haha
But seriosuly.
He's mine.
Tanita (:- Number of posts : 1708
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Re: Daddy Would Do Anything [15+]
Haha,
okay then..
U can have him..
then I can have..
like,
Lil' Heini (Corfitz)
or Ryan 'I'm almost' Dunn or something...
XD
okay then..
U can have him..
then I can have..
like,
Lil' Heini (Corfitz)
or Ryan 'I'm almost' Dunn or something...
XD
Re: Daddy Would Do Anything [15+]
No fighting girls
Love you twooooo, thanks for commenting!
Love you twooooo, thanks for commenting!
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Re: Daddy Would Do Anything [15+]
DEAL!
No idea who those guys are but
Welcome Neny!
No idea who those guys are but
Welcome Neny!
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5.
Suddenly I felt a hand on my shoulder and I jumped back. ‘’What the fuck,’’ I screamed when I saw the policeman dude standing there. I turned towards the house and stared at the woman ‘’I told you there was no need to call the police, jeez!’’ I sighed.
‘’You’re coming with me. Your name and your parents telephone number please.’’ The policeman said while handcuffing me. ‘’I don’t have my fathers number but he is standing in front of you so you can ask him,’’ I said and started to whistle a song. ‘’Don’t joke around with me young lady, your name and parents phone number. Now!’’ the policeman said and I noticed he was getting pissed off. ‘’Amy Jones and like I said I don’t have my fathers number but he’s standing in front of you!’’ I said and was losing my patience. I need something strong. I started whistling a song again and looked at the people standing in front of me in amusement. Everybody was staring at me and Tom was the first one to quickly talk to the policeman, he took the handcuffs off and drove away. ‘’So, Amy Jones…’’ Harry said kind off sarcastically while his wife took the kids inside. James waving at me from behind the window and pulling funny faces after a few seconds. I stuck my tongue out and pulled a funny face too. ‘’The one and only!’’ I said smiling while I searched my pockets for a joint or something. Nothing there so I opened my bag and looked for something nice to drink. Vodka! I took the bottle out and took a zip when my phone rang. ‘’Shit, finally something nice to drink,’’ I mumbled and picked up my phone. It was my mum who wanted to know if I came ‘’home’’ safe, I didn’t want to talk to her so threw the phone to Danny. ‘’Flirt with her!’’ I said. He walked away with the phone and a couple of minutes later he came back, handed me the phone and then took my bag and walked towards his house. I followed him immediately ‘cause he had my bag, off course the three guys followed me and closed the door. I followed Danny into the huge living room and looked around in amazement. I was slipping off into my own world but slipped back into the real one when he took away my vodka. ‘’I don’t think that was yours,’’ I said while taking it back and putting it into my bag just to be polite.
Suddenly I felt a hand on my shoulder and I jumped back. ‘’What the fuck,’’ I screamed when I saw the policeman dude standing there. I turned towards the house and stared at the woman ‘’I told you there was no need to call the police, jeez!’’ I sighed.
‘’You’re coming with me. Your name and your parents telephone number please.’’ The policeman said while handcuffing me. ‘’I don’t have my fathers number but he is standing in front of you so you can ask him,’’ I said and started to whistle a song. ‘’Don’t joke around with me young lady, your name and parents phone number. Now!’’ the policeman said and I noticed he was getting pissed off. ‘’Amy Jones and like I said I don’t have my fathers number but he’s standing in front of you!’’ I said and was losing my patience. I need something strong. I started whistling a song again and looked at the people standing in front of me in amusement. Everybody was staring at me and Tom was the first one to quickly talk to the policeman, he took the handcuffs off and drove away. ‘’So, Amy Jones…’’ Harry said kind off sarcastically while his wife took the kids inside. James waving at me from behind the window and pulling funny faces after a few seconds. I stuck my tongue out and pulled a funny face too. ‘’The one and only!’’ I said smiling while I searched my pockets for a joint or something. Nothing there so I opened my bag and looked for something nice to drink. Vodka! I took the bottle out and took a zip when my phone rang. ‘’Shit, finally something nice to drink,’’ I mumbled and picked up my phone. It was my mum who wanted to know if I came ‘’home’’ safe, I didn’t want to talk to her so threw the phone to Danny. ‘’Flirt with her!’’ I said. He walked away with the phone and a couple of minutes later he came back, handed me the phone and then took my bag and walked towards his house. I followed him immediately ‘cause he had my bag, off course the three guys followed me and closed the door. I followed Danny into the huge living room and looked around in amazement. I was slipping off into my own world but slipped back into the real one when he took away my vodka. ‘’I don’t think that was yours,’’ I said while taking it back and putting it into my bag just to be polite.
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Re: Daddy Would Do Anything [15+]
Yay!
6.
‘’Danny?’’ Harry suddenly asked, probably just to break the silence. Danny didn’t answer so I decided I could say something. ‘’He is in shock, probably normal if your kid shows up after sixteen years; stoned and drunk. You have a really nice family Harry, James is really cute.’’ I said smiling and he smiled back at me. Dougie started to laugh and fell down on the couch. ‘’Nice joke! What do you want?’’ He grinned. ‘’Joke? Who is joking?’’ I asked, the vodka was kicking in so I wasn’t really thinking anymore. ‘’Oh you mean the kid-thingy?’’ I mumbled and threw my passport on the table. Tom, Dougie and Harry immediately looked at it but Danny already knew I wasn’t lying. ‘’Fuck, she’s your kid.’’ Dougie blurted out. ‘’You kind off should have noticed when I was talking about the incest-thingy but okay,’’ I mumbled and sat down on a chair that seemed pretty comfy.
6.
‘’Danny?’’ Harry suddenly asked, probably just to break the silence. Danny didn’t answer so I decided I could say something. ‘’He is in shock, probably normal if your kid shows up after sixteen years; stoned and drunk. You have a really nice family Harry, James is really cute.’’ I said smiling and he smiled back at me. Dougie started to laugh and fell down on the couch. ‘’Nice joke! What do you want?’’ He grinned. ‘’Joke? Who is joking?’’ I asked, the vodka was kicking in so I wasn’t really thinking anymore. ‘’Oh you mean the kid-thingy?’’ I mumbled and threw my passport on the table. Tom, Dougie and Harry immediately looked at it but Danny already knew I wasn’t lying. ‘’Fuck, she’s your kid.’’ Dougie blurted out. ‘’You kind off should have noticed when I was talking about the incest-thingy but okay,’’ I mumbled and sat down on a chair that seemed pretty comfy.
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Re: Daddy Would Do Anything [15+]
Haha, I love James.
The end.
The end.
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Re: Daddy Would Do Anything [15+]
And for the new chapter;
I love Dougie.
The end.
haha, don't tell James that I'm cheating on him with Dougie!(:
I love Dougie.
The end.
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Re: Daddy Would Do Anything [15+]
I won't tell
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